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Letting the emotion swallow me entire
While I, myself, gaze at divinity
Spying on her splendor, elegant as a burning fire
The aura of her perfection surpasses serenity
Petals frolicking across her cheek
Her gracefulness is one none can achieve
I’d spend an eternity with her, every single week
We’ll be together forever, we believe
Watching the water wave and dip in the deep sea
Each humble groove of water is a flattery to her striking blue eyes
Everything she is means more than merely just the world to me
Her personality and traits I sure do prize
To embrace her tightly, and to listen to her tender voice
To kiss her innocent lips is my favorite choice
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I wrote this for school.. we had to do a sonnet..
teacher said mine was the best

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:iconmakasha:
that's pretty good :)

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It takes 46 muscles to frown, 27 to smile, 4 to flip the bird, but only 3 for a proper trigger squeeze.
:iconxxesperanxx:
thanks =)
any idea on what i should work on?
:iconmakasha:
not really...not on this anyways. :) You've got talent kid!

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It takes 46 muscles to frown, 27 to smile, 4 to flip the bird, but only 3 for a proper trigger squeeze.
:icondevrushulira:
that's very good ^^ I like it
:iconxxesperanxx:
thanks ^^
i love poetry
:iconshethinksshelovesu:
the words makes the sonnet deep and meaningful.. i like it :]

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If I didn't know any better I think You're STUPID and yet I say this: I Love You...

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:iconxxesperanxx:
thanks..
its been so long..
i cant write another..
:iconshethinksshelovesu:
i bet you could if you rele tried.. you have always been an aspiring writer :]

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If I didn't know any better I think You're STUPID and yet I say this: I Love You...

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